Hi
I updated the phone format to the correct format
osm.wiki/Australian_Tagging_Guidelines#Mobile_Phones_.28Cell_Phones.29

I have re-tagged as office=computer and abused the name to include description to Tier1 Repairs computer repair service.
Feel free to correct if you prefer other.

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all the items that others mapped and you have now deleted seem to still exist in this area.
Why have you deleted these items from trhe OSM?

For your info.…I noticed PSP listed as “Principal shared path routes” under the url_2 tag
https://web.archive.org/web/20090713093031/http://www.dpi.wa.gov.au/cycling/1522.asp

Hi
if Doctors Flat Road is private, a tag access=private needs to be added to the road.
Are you able to add this tag to the sections that are not open to the public.

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You dragged part of Mary Street to a different location. Can yo drag it back to where it should be, thanks.

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I corrected the phone format
osm.wiki/Australian_Tagging_Guidelines

Hi
Please refer to the Australia phone guidelines in this case as some numbers are only able to be from within Australia and have a special format

osm.wiki/Australian_Tagging_Guidelines

I have corrected this for you

Changes are applied to the database immediately but the rendered map using the data takes longer depending on the map provider. I would assume there is no need to revert the changes you have made if you can visually confirm your changes using the imagery provided in Josm. The tracks should be well depicted I expect.

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We do not have permission to use Google satellite or street view imagery for mapping the OSM. Please only use the available imagery provided in Josm imagery preferences. Currently, the latest for the area is likely to be Bing and Maxar.

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There is a source:name tag associated with the way. You need to change it to the source you used or delete the tag if you are using a different source for the name.

I removed the bridge tag from 1km stretch of road and leave to you to place where needed.

no response, changed hospital to clinic for Orthoclinic Specialist Orthodontics practice.

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You have changed most of Woodcock Road in to a bridge. I expect you need to split the road each side of the river and just add the bridge tag to that small section of the road which passes over river (where the bridge is built)

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it’s your choice how you wish to map area boundaries as there is no consensus and valid reasons to choose either methods.
I will give one more link which mentions
‘Using highway centrelines’
osm.wiki/Land_use
Cheers

@Maradona11 removed access=no
I have added...
maxweight:conditional=yes (Semitrailer 42.5t, Truck and Dog Trailer 50t, Special Purpose Vehicles use NVHR guideline)
maxwidth=4.57 m
a note tag with info from transport NSW.
source:maxweight=Transport NSW
source:maxwidth=Transport NSW

Hi
for info, most osm mappers would discourage you from joining area boundaries like parks, landuse, wood to roadway centrelines.
https://help.openstreetmap.org/questions/5352/should-the-edges-of-landuse-or-boundary-areas-share-points-with-streets-that-form-their-borders

You could use access=conditional and use some of vehicle property options
osm.wiki/Conditional_restrictions
I think a note or a note tag using the Transport NSW information would also be helpful.
Removing the access=no tag alone seems to me to not be the correct solution.

I 'll leave to MSFT editorial team to sort out.

Hi
there are a lot of untagged points in this changeset. Also some of the address (lot numbers ?) in Lucknow Park have been deleted. Waste bins near the sports grounds in the school have been deleted - have they been removed or maybe replaced by plastic wheely bins.